i wake up,
or did i just fall back to sleep
the crisp
crushed cloth
my skins odor in the morning
hold my face in your hands,
let me see your eyes
let nothing in "life" just pass by
not a single thing.
i sense, i hear and talk to her
life is a "she",
and she's beautiful
don't wake me up,
i don't want to miss her again.
i only can see her
with my eyes closed
:its a shame i cant touch you.
*ps: again, birthdays post is still on ppl.. click
32 comments:
This moderation thing ARGH :@ al7een ish3arafni itha shotgun wila la2 :r !!
Me likey bes lifes an IT ! REVERSE SEXISIM ! :r
tara afta7 anti-PAG thidkum lol
ooob oob belated SHOTGUN =D
*BANG BANG*
*CHEERS*
*APPLAUSE*
=P maku shu'3l adri
3n meno ga3ed tetkalemain!? many fahem shy! Y is it always hard 4 me to understand your post !? :P
Seeing her is still a great thing... I mean something is still better than nothing right?
And just when I think No3ik has reached the ultimate hight in my Favorite blooger list...She rises again
Amazing peice!
Allaaaaaah!
it is an amazing image u drow her.
madri, bs what i got is that: she lives "life" through a dream..
"don't wake me up,
i don't want to miss her again." amazing! ee wallah dont wake me up :( dreams r our portal to a better "life", to escape our harsh, ruthless reality
i loved it soooo much :D
God bless u.
Go you and Me ;D
life is a "she",
and she's beautiful
lovely words
wsorah hlewaaaah ;)
*dooda:
mabrok 3laik al shot gun ..
theres no sexism :p
ent ili 9ayir chauvinist
hehehehe - thnx for the spelling btw ;) -
im glad u liked it.
*zizo:
because reading
requires both:
imagination & thinking .. so good luck with that ;p
hehehe kidding man ,, afa 3laik bl msn ,, ill explain it to u.
kam ziz 3idnaaa ;)
*phoenix:
u amaze me i swear!
for someone in ur age, and mashalah mashalah
ur able to understand what im saying ..
3eeni 3laich barda ;)
- very very flattered -
ya7ilwich :***
*marzouq:
ur comments always have this special something, u know ,, that "only marzouq would say" thing ;)
so i need to get my self a bike then ;p
i loved it. the feeling of a ride.
*reem:
ur interpretation is beautiful
and was very close to mine.
i was saying, when we close our eyes we feel life just as it is, and what i see when i do , i see "her" and i love her. shes so gentle sensitive and beautiful. when i open my eyes shes back to an "it" that is only a bunch of things that are harsh and could even hurt u.
im saying sometimes we only see the truth when we close our eyes, when were a sleep were not being distracted but the crule reality as u put it :*** well done 7ubi
u go me go!
*soud:
im glad u liked the image
im wondering why u liked that part ... what image did it give u?
*1509:
lol id say
specialy when they have "scofield" in them ,,, or "superman" ;p
Im not a chauvinist, i said IT not HE :r
whats that saying ily shay 3an we give u guys a hand bes u take the whole arm, ilmuhim itha 3irafty yea your doing that :r loll
madre!!
ummmmmmmmmm
etha 9a7bik 7ilo latakla kila?!
or
ggrrrrr !! ma ligait ela ana u ask!
:p almuhim and if i did bite ,,, tistaaahil :p
:-) that was moving.
Ok did I comment anything?
You like life while your eyes close huh..
well guess what..
You've been tagged.
wooow! mashallah :)
Don't let me open my eyes
I can see better when they're closed
Don't wake me up from my sleep
I have my life there to keep
Where all reality has been exposed
And all the beauty that never dies
Just an attempt! I don't know if it makes sense or relate to what you have written.
I may expand it and post it in my blog later :P
this piece makes me smile...
i'm still smiling...
Shotgun .. kaifi ..
I love it hons, lotsies. You didn't tell me you're posting a poem, witch :-p
oo I'm sick shwaya oo 7asoon is being an arse and he's like, so mean lately and needs a couple of kicks on the arse
OK, seriously blushing with a smile from one ear to the other and cheeck as red as an apple..
And i only understand so much lana you express so so so well..
You're purely an inspiration sweetheart!! ;*
eeeeeeeeeehhh ya bnayty, hathy eldeniaaa.. ygolech elbab elee eyee mena elreee7 sedy westereee7ay ;p~~
oo '7alech naymaa why did u wake up in the first place ;p
a5ir ziman nas ya7giroona o isamoon i7na meanies inzain inzain =P
off topic: Im under ur "No3kum"... thank u thank u :P i feel special :$
*hussain:
welcome to my blog and thanks ;)
*marzouq:
wow!
maybe u should write about that..
u know ,, u and the road, the bike..
the feeling .. the journy the sensation.. u could even write a poem! ;) give it a try.
*hussain:
u sure did.. its not u, its my stupid comment moderation system, ur comments are sent to me and i get to publish them after reading them! i know lol boring.
*i live in q8:
guess what .. ill pretend my eyes were closed when i read that i was tagged for the 100th time :s 6igny wala etagtigny x[
*reem:
:** ma 3laich zood 3mre.
*hopeless poet:
amazing! did i inspire u ;)
wanasaaa :D
anyways ... its beautiful and u exactly know what i meant in my poem.
deffinetly expand - publish - then tell me ;)
*batty:
waaay fara7teeny! 3asa doom doom :*
*scarlo:
slut, u shuddup big time,
ur always busy never online :P
that doesnt mean i dont love u..
dirsay o malich sh`3l fena ana o 7ason .. :***
*phoenix:
wasaaalom dalba al blashosha girl!
7beeeeeeeeeeeeeeebty im honored walllah :* anytime.
*common sense:
ent laish kila em`6ayi3?
la 3ndi la bab wala ree7 lol alah elawi3 chabdik :p
im sleeping all day man, if they dont wake me up b3dain matfa6ar :p
*dooda:
bisheeeeeeeeeeeh bisheeeeeeeeeeh ;p
*um mit3ib:
yaaaaaaaaaaa b3d sabdi walllah
u are special :* i love all my readers walllahi. ent tamreen ya albi.
y laugh!
did u ever give it a try ;p
You always succeed in doing it!
You always write something special 0o et9adgeeen madrii how u do it bSs mashalla 3laich, walla shay ;Pp~
;*
"life is a "she",
and she's beautiful "
She's beautiful when she wants to be.
Lately she's been quite ugly with me :/
Nonetheless...beautifully written.
Nice, and simple :D
lol amooora! 7ayarteeny ??
shino ili "walla shay"
u know i hate this ;p so u better tell me whats the "Walla shay" is :*
I like your taste in choosing the pictures for your posts ;)
me going off topic, ya3ny I didn't get it in a polite way ;p get it ?
*fuchsia_s:
when shes being ugly, i call her an "it" ;)
thanks 3mre.
*tinkerbell:
actually i just wokeup read this beautiful comment of urs. and im going back to sleep now ;p
*nunu:
7ayate!! kilich thooq :)
b3dain wainich ,, long time no blog?
*common:
heheheh smarty pant ;p
like always, ill explain to u b3dain inshalah.
loooooooooooooooooool
ok ok ! i understand now .. sorry for bringing those memories back ;p
hehe shfeech ?
ur poems 3ajebeeen hatha qa9dy dont worry.. mithil ma gelt before kel ele taktebeena short and effective..
Ya3nii in 2 words " Walla Shay !"
ok amoora :*
thanks for the explination 7boba.
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