Sunday, October 29, 2006

dimmed


motionless
look up or down,
theres no pathway
im not standing.
i cannot reach...
with the senses of my mind.
gravity had failed me

*ps: this poem is me this time.
*pps: listening to: tonight and the rest of my life - Nina Gordon. thnx scarlo :*

36 comments:

Yazeed said...

SHOTGUN!!!!
HAHAHAHA

Common_Sense said...

yah yah yah shoooot gun @@

Yazeed said...

beat u common, beat u fair and square,
rss people rss!

no3ik
i dont know u too well, yet ;), to know whats going on, but i wish from the bottom of my heart that u find ur path

take care babez

LaiaLy_q8 said...

nice babe

Common_Sense said...

just 3aaadly noomtech oo yalaa bala dalaa3 ;p

fooog shenhaa gowat 3ainhaaa, I blame u for not getting the shoot gun :@ yazeed, hayen ;)

YoupPpi said...

waLLa this is me now .. ;/
Laish kila Ysadf ena u write these things o i read them awl ma ag3d mn inooM ;( ..

Marzouq said...

I find a path everytime I put my helmet on, and rev the engine.. things just flow from their no thinking required!

No3iK said...

*yazeed:
mabrok!! :p

*common:
wek wek wek ;p

*yazeed:
grow up ;p baskum!

no one can know anyone too well zooz.
thank u for ur kid words :)
very heart warming.

*lialy:
u think? :*

*common:
shyab al noma al7en!! im not talking bout my noma !! x[
hehehe tistahil zian esawi fek zooz.

*youppi:
mawateeeeny mn al `6i7ik
im so sorry girl ..
look at the bright side, u already have a path and ur on it! mashalah so its good :)

*marzouq:
u make it seem as if life with a bike, is just perfect!
do i really need to get me one?

Marzouq said...

Its not that its perfect, its just that it makes it so much better. You just put your energy into one thing, and your mind becomes clear of all the troubles in the world! i know so many people who ride because they say its thereputic (dont know how to spell). Thats why a lot of people just get on a bike and want to go across the globe!

But excluding some of the idiots in Kuwait.. hehehe..

The thing is once you find something your really passionate about, the path will find you. I know that sounds corny, but it is what has happened!

I hope you do find what your looking for! :)

Tinkerbell said...

gravity is overrated

do0da said...

Crazy ppl need no path, we go our own way =)

Yazeed said...

*youppi:
WaLLaH iNiCh BaRe2Ea oO 3aLA gAd NeYaTiCH, mAdRy ShLooN RaBy JaM3icH mA3A No3iK?
tara intay mafeech shay (tara ta3abt min il font malich, madry shloon taktibeen post kamil feeh :P) ga3da tig3deen oo itnameen mithil il nas.

*no3ik:
i kid, i kid, ma3a inna i just learned new things about some people's sleeping pattrens ;)
and oh, my neighbors are back, wainch when i need u!!!

AmoOora said...

Smile ya 7lwah
You deserve to be hapy ;*

You will never find something if your looking for it so just stop searching and it find you..

Im not sure if what i wrote is relevent to what you said..

DiiGMaa said...

who needs gravity when you can fly.. or skate board.. don't ask... I coulda said parasail you know :P

Wake up you sleepy head !! miss ya

ScarlO said...

me hates gravity..

Piers Smith said...

only levity can defeat gravity

Piers Smith said...

only levity can defeat gravity

phoenix said...

I told you that your are an angel!!

If this is no3ik without gravity.. Then I hope gravity never returns because you're great just the way you are.
And i dont wish that you find the path because i know you will sweetheart!!

Carlsb3rg said...

you are going nowhere? or are you falling into bottomless pit ?

ZiZoTiMe said...

Kel hatha 3alashan ghaiartay no3mtech?! ;)

Bella Color said...

the path is there, u reach it when u have enough sleep :P

Kidding babes :**

I know what u mean, bas trust me, the path is there, just be patient & u'll reach it....

Good Luck :)

Dr.Lost said...

i hate poems ;p

Dr.Lost said...

loool at tinkerbell's comment..9ij airhead ;p

Reem said...

ahhhh! woooooooooooooow!! yeeesss babe girl.. that's THE poem, a poem that kicks all other poems' as* ;p
u know what.. u r vividly discribing my state most of the time.. dont u just like that? having no sense of gravity what-so-ever.. floating all over the place, it's really unique.. u should celebrate this.. u r sooo free that even gravity (scientific proven fact) cannot hold u down.. why do we need a path? create one, that is only urs, not even an actual path,, a path that's all over the place.. i hate pathways,, they construct me, i feel trapped in them.. "with the senses of my mind. gravity had failed me" just perfect my dear :D
Go You, Me, and Gravity ;p

Reem said...

ahhhh! woooooooooooooow!! yeeesss babe girl.. that's THE poem, a poem that kicks all other poems' as* ;p
u know what.. u r vividly discribing my state most of the time.. dont u just like that? having no sense of gravity what-so-ever.. floating all over the place, it's really unique.. u should celebrate this.. u r sooo free that even gravity (scientific proven fact) cannot hold u down.. why do we need a pathway? create one, that is only urs, not even an actual path,, a path that's all over the place.. i hate pathways,, they construct me, i feel trapped in them.. "with the senses of my mind. gravity had failed me" just perfect my dear :D
Go You, Me, and Gravity ;p

Zalabya said...

me likey ur poem Bery much

Maze said...

I can feel what ur passing thru...good luck with whatever u do and hope u'll find the right way...ur articles are really touching...take care

Fuzzy said...

use a GPS

Transparently said...

That looks more like a drawing, a painting, but it could possibly just be a photo, anyway it looks great. Good words to go with it.

Aurora said...

Mashallah...beautiful! And the pic suits it perfectly...

Hope you find you way back... =)

me said...

with no motion eventually u will fly n the air and no gravity n the world will hold u back to the ground ;)

LiLaCs said...

scientificaly gravity CANNOT fail you.. If your trying to make another like half assed attempt to be like all poetic and stuff..It went WAAAAAY over my head:P

No3iK said...

i know i havent commented back.
i read ur comments, they make me smile and warm me up.. but i didnt know what to write .. anyways ... sorry for being late.


*marzouq:
"thereputic (dont know how to spell)"
the last thing u should worry bout is spelling when ur in my blog:p

"But excluding some of the idiots in Kuwait.."
u really made my day :D !!

*tinks:
lol u think :*

*doda:
shfeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ...!

*yazooz:
eeewww!! ur neighbors are revolting lol
sorryy but its not fun anymore.

*amoora:
:) im always smiling dont worry
well, ur to young babes ..
things arent that simple. wish they were.
and what u wrote is partialy relevant.
but i meant career wise. i had plans and dreams. and im failing or are they failing my im really not sure.

*digmaa:
a5eeeeeeeeeeeeeh 3laich
i love ur wildness ;)
- wink wink -

*scarlo:
lmao! enty to7faaa :*

*piers:
omg!! ur baaaaaaaaaack :*
u think??? im not so sure ...
i need to talk to u bout this.

*phoooophii:
heeey 7bbety ..
why is it when i read ur comments i feel like hugging a pillow or something ??
tyanineen bnaya wallah mn 9igi
well if u like no3ik with out gravity, u should see her with it someday .. ;)

*ziz:
ent 6oool 3mrik bitim em`6ayi3
specialy in my blog.

*bella:
- sigh -
that felt good.
u know me .. so i can trust what u said.

*dr.lost:
u hate them because? :p
and what kilshay wala my tinky :*

*reem:
full of energy and power!
mashalah u are ur own red bull girl ;)
i love the life the vitality that u have.
beautifuly said, and i should learn from u.

*zalbya:
hehehehe 7bebty ili galba ..
enzain a7ibich.

*maze:
thanks ur very sweet.
and im glad u can sense my article,
i write how i feel, i wish ppl can touch the feelings, words and ideas. not just read.

*fuzzy:
whats that?

*transparently:
well yes it is a photo, but retouched. by brilliant artists.

*aurora:
it means alot thanks dear :*

*me:
wow!
ur comment simply, "wowed" me
thank u.

*lilacs:
u will always be my litle fav s...
i just love u no matter what :*

Reem said...

ahhhh!! what an honor :D
wallah u bring out things in me, with ur amazing writings..
God bless us all, sisters and brother ;p
mwah! :*

AmoOora said...

Your plans and dreams will come true inshalla.
Alot of big successful people at your age were lost and didnt know where to go bSs slowly they found their way..

I really hope you all the best in everything you do. Inshalla you find what your looking for ;*

No3iK said...

*reem:
god bless ;)

:** i dont bring anything, its already there.

*amoora:
u are an a-n-g-e-l !