Monday, September 04, 2006

5 a.m. jacket


the clock reads '5 a.m.'
and my hands are freezing.
i can't touch the water.
cos it will make them colder and colder
And like ice, they will shatter.

i wear my jacket although it's summer.
i love to feel warm.
i hate to feel cold.
my hands are so cold.
and my nails are turning purple

i love it when people are honest.
and hate it when they like and fake.
i hate them for lying to everyone
except themselves.
it's as if they hate everyone.
except themselves.

so I'm wearing my jacket.
with my cold fingers.
and dry throat.
and the clock's hands pointing to the 5.

a voice in my head laughs.
'how funny it is when things
seem so trustworthy'
i tell the voice to shut up so I can sleep.
good night now; I need to sleep.



*scarlo: loveu:*

22 comments:

ScarlO said...

They need a good kick on the arse, hon...
And go put your hands under the faucet and turn on the hot water
:-p

No3iK said...

heheheh

:*

its ok, typing warms them up
ummmmmmmmmmmmmm
i dont wanna burn them if thats what ur thinkgin ;p hehehehehe trying to get rid of me huh!

Extinct Dodo said...

this poem reminds me of winter, when i would plop my butt down on the radiator til my butt ends up striped like fried bacon lol :">

badly.drawn.woman said...

ice ice baby...

Common_Sense said...

Simple and Meaningful, I liked it ;) keep it up honey and wa6y 3al AC ;p

لمياء الحالمة said...

When i read the top few lines, thru aggregator, I thought you have a bad cerculation problem!

:)

nice poem

No3iK said...

*exdodo:
hey babes
missed u round here ;)
i think we all do that in winterlol
i do it with my feet lol strips feet ;p


*badly drawn woman:
lol why r u using this nick now ;p
hehehehe
ice ice ..... ;p

*common sense:
thanks ;)
ac ... well lets say .. if it was up to .. id rather do something else rather then awa6i 3l ac ;p

*lamya2 al 7alima:
lol !
i dont blame u ;p
anyways sweety thanks :*

um-miT3ib said...

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Ya7laaaty said...

good night

Twix said...

I hate waking up an hour or so before I should. Its the most annoying feeling, whats worst is if its cold. I love waking up at 2 or 3 am, cause I thank good I have a couple more hours to sleep.

If you think u have a problem with your cold fingers, wait till winter starts and see how cold the toilet seat is.

do0da said...

I used to put socks on my hands to keep em warm =D ... YES they were clean !! lol my sis always gave me that wth r u thinkin look bes it worked ! except u couldnt type with them fa when i do go on msn i start talkin non stop to keep em moving =P

ZiZoTiMe said...

Hatha el kalam wayed keber shakla! Bs ya rby laish ma afham shy mena (As usual)!! :P

AmoOoRa said...

No3ik,, al7een kel hal poems enty katbat.ho0m ??

Soulwater said...

This poem is not about cold or winter or showers.

This is about trusting people and then thinking she lost it.

But at times ppl do get confused No3ik , and keeping everything each of us share in their hearts like a priceless treasure, they know why the heart goes cold when they change.

No3iK said...

*um mit3ib:
7bebty thanks wayid
i really want to go.
but im going through slobness phase
im stuck hom all day
i dont feel like seeing anyone for now :)
when ever im out of it, dunkin donuts will be my new home ;p

*ya7laaty:
nite to you to :*

*twix:
im not cold usuallly
i just sometimes get cold hands!
waking up never been a problem to me
coz i simply dont just wakeup they have to drag me out of my bed for me to wakeup ;p

*dooda:
sock!!
omg that sooooooooooo adorable
im sure they dont smeel ;p
hehehehhe any ways ill try that ;)

*zizo:
looooooool
look i gotta give it to you
i realy respect u for trying!
u always do ,,, ya kbeeeeeeeeeer
ya ziiiiiiiiiiz ;)

*amoooora:

e 7bebty everything on this blog, is mine :)
i write them.

*soulwater:
thank u, thank u, thank u.
u were the only one who could see why i wrote this piece ;)
which shows u one thing,
ur as messed up as iam ;p
good for us!

Soulwater said...

"messed up" -madness , mania... all the terms which where the relative comparism of the society to us being ourselves...

so.. now whos Dr.Eeeeeevil ? ;p

No3iK said...

omg!!!

u sooooo reminded me of emily dickinson!!

"MUCH madness is divinest sense
To a discerning eye;
Much sense the starkest madness.
’T is the majority
In this, as all, prevails. 5
Assent, and you are sane;
Demur,—you ’re straightway dangerous,
And handled with a chain."

i love her!

Soulwater said...

emily dickinson...hmm im not that person, nor am i so knowledgeable, but non the less, glad to know we have another companion in the "madder realm"
;p

AmoOoRa said...

ahh walla ma darait ina you write the poems..
Waid 7lweeeeen, your a PRO ;)

No3iK said...

*soulwater:
well start knowing her then ;)
trust me ull fall in love :)

*amoora:
yeh!
7bebty im very very very flattered :*
thanks ;)

Your Battlefield said...

i love it...i love it...what a way to get back from a hectic school week to unwind and read this post..i love this piece one of the best.

i missed you its been far too long since i've commented :***

No3iK said...

batty!!

i cant believe my eyes :```(

:** i missed u 7bebty
i know school!!
yalllah inshallah final year and youll be free ;)

i miss u wallah i do :*
good luck girl.
im veeeeeeeeeery glad u liked this one hope you understod what its really about :)