Friday, September 15, 2006

For in that sleep of death, what dreams may come

this is life
as we sleep, dream and see
as every minute passes by
as we grow and just be
it is life.

are we really alive?
is all of this real?
why do we wakeup to strive?
why do we, in the first place, feel?

they tell us, "this is life"
you have to struggle,
some are naive and some are vain
you have to even, suffer!
when ur in pain, unbearable pain.
all they can tell us is; "this is life"

what is life?
why are we still ? breathing it
bleeding it
wanting it
is alot much simpler and easier
a grave is everyones last bed
down there, it's happier.

*note: this is not a suicide note ;p


do0da said...


Well cant say i dont agree and glad it aint no suicide note =P

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Carlsb3rg said...

Life can be beautiful with the right people surrounding you, and even with it's hardships and pains, it is beautiful with those people :)

A Daydreamer said...

i once wrote something titled "This is Life" and i was wondering the same thing... *sigh*

well-written hon.

Common_Sense said...

God created us to worship and serve him in gratitude .. I guess we had that in elementary school ;)

now u have a meaning for ur life :P

No3iK said...

im glad to ;p

how come ur comments always have hope in them,! mashalah
they really do lighten up my posts.and my thoughts.

wow really ok please link ur post i want to read it
:) and thank u.

hon! i dont need answers.
specialy the ones coming from elementary school
were grown we get to think wonder and most of all feel!
i was simply expressing how i felt.
we all have meaning for our lives! what was that? :p

Carlsb3rg said...


I'm flattered. I guess it's the way i look at life :)

NuNu™ said...

Amazing! Loved it =)
Well done!

chikapappi said...

Ya sater....leish eltasha2om ya benty!?

Fuchsia Spunk said...

Life SUX for the most part.
Bs kmaan feeha ashyaa2 7ilwa ;P

15/09 said...

nice...sometimes it seems easier to just give up i guess, but time and again we find something worth breathing for ;)

phoenix said...

This sure shows the brighter side of death. And sometimes i feel the same, like when we die, its the time to relax.
Perfectly said hun.
Good job!

Anonymous said...

That was sad =(

Fuzzy said...

and what is death ? if you think of it, death doesnt exist, there if life, and there is no-life, which is the opposite to living......
climb up your blog and jump :P

No3iK said...

im so happy for u ;)

thanks 7bebty :*

lol i love the ya benty part ;p
mo tasha2om its one of those days thats all.

*fuchsia spunk:
i know
but these days...sucking alot.

i sure do have that thing :)

thanks hon :*
i see many ppl try and look the other way when ever death is mentioned.
its like the ultimate not known, enemy of all people.
writing about it is just amazing could be endless.

well, not necessarly :)

aham shay anik tbi tgarib feni :p
i say u do it, then ill get back to you ;)
but what u said is true
and what u said is only one way to define it.

Tinkerbell said...

death is the sweetest that too gloomy? i meant to sound optimistic :p

Your Battlefield said...

sometimes we go on living, when deep down were dead...:( and i got to say another beautiful piece from you :) keep them coming

No3iK said...

u did 7bebty :*
ehehehe its cute! u actually made death sound cutw ;p

now that was a unique comment
like always :*
u keep them and ill keep them to ;)

Bloo said...

this is life... and we take turns

sometimes ur up
and sometimes ur down.. so says the people who put u down.. or lift u up, this is life in bitter and sweet, in sleep and in awake.

Soulwater said...

White roses are my speciality, i always carry one to such places .
Consider one from me to her.

No3iK said...

bloo :)

ur comment put a huge smile on my face :D

thank u i loved how u put it.