-screamingbeating
pounding,
struggling
fighting
bleeding and shattering-
all I am is a breakdown.
and you call this a relationship!
"let go of my hair"...
*ps: ppl from now i tell u, this is fictional it has nothing to do with me so dont worry :p
*pps: i loved all the pics u sent me! its amazing i had a great time really! for those of u who didnt send their pics yet .. the gallery is always open ;)
26 comments:
amazing. really
if i could label it in a form; it should fit into the wave of new literary forms in the gulf area..
not a short story, but a "very short story", VSS
How do you always know the right words to choose? How do you do it No3ik? How??
You're good... Realy Gooooood!
Amazing Sweety.. AS ALWAYS!!
ashwa inha fiction;p elwath3 3la 6ag em6aaaaagag wo tikifikh shalah 7adna:P
hehe interesttiing..
ok No3ik..publish the book..ur tagged
اول شي مافهمت شي
;P
ثاني شي ادري ان رسمتي احلى وحده
:P
miss u mjrema :*
ashwa its fictional.. you got me worried ya 7lwah..
0o 3ndii idea for you, you should hav all your poems published into a book, walla lana alot of the things you write people can relate to so it might help some people out there..
hehe 3ad ana om il.afkar ;p
i liked it really
bas
shsalfat let go my hair? gamla emchalba feeh?
bet6egeni adri
*lialy:
lol why do u always never surprise me with ur comments lol very kuwaity comments ... and yes the one i wrote about i think i know ppl who still are treated like this :p
*mulan:
thanks :*
*antihero:
first of all: welcome to my blog.
so im a VSS writer ;) thanks.
*phooph:
wheeeeeeere have u been? :(
and how come u didnt send me a pic?
ana za3lana :``(
anyways 7bebty i think the recp of my writings is called, experiance! madre ,, could be .. it just feels sometimes i havee loads of feelings and i want to let them out in a special way. with very few words that carry with them, loads of meaning and feelings at the same time.
*marzouq:
i know what u mean :) say that to the ppl i know who insist on fixing things that are made to be broke.
*shakshaka:
lol shakli 3awart rasich heheheh b3d 3mre :***
*spikey:
yeah man inshalah i need time bs :p i dont know what to do for now?
*si7leya:
shasawi feech 9ayra motargima 7agich ana
o 9ortich 7adha tshawig ;)
*amoora:
sweeety! :** thanks wallah
been a dream of ine to publish a book someday! u sayign these words :) it means alot wallah so thanks :**
*zalabyaa:
shakli ana ili bamchi3 sha3rich 3la hl comment lol allah elawi3 chabd ebleesich shyab al gamil al7een!! :s hehehe bada3taay
very sad
Sure its fiction you don't have to make us feel dumb by telling us it is fiction.
And I likes. erm, especially how you *became* a breakdown
The hair bit was a bit theatrical.. erm, you could do without that, my child .. and i'm just trying to sound smart..
keep writing :*
**hands no3iik a brush** Dont brush your hair silly!! Hit the other guy :P
Illlla No3ik Tiz3al.. Ana MAA Artha!!
Look, even when you explain it, it sounds like poetry!
Again YOU'RE GOOD accualy great, more like amazing!!...
think happy thoughts darling.. happy thoughts.. ;**
3ad ur bedroom looked better with all those daises ;P
*carls:
yes i know ... sad things happen u know.
*daydreamer:
lol yeah i remember when i was a kid i used to do that :p
thanks dear :*
*scarlo:
baby enty ili fahma
i mean u get literature well .. the comparisons .. so u shouldve got the last bit. ;)
*ziz:
aham shay anik ga3d tsawi da3aya 3ndi !! ya gileel al 7aya u didnt even comment!! wallah loma ziz this comment wouldve been deleted :p
*lilacs:
LOOOOOOOOOOOL
i loved the idea ;) thanks babes
*phooph:
b3d 3mre :** o ana agdar az3al 3l phooph?? :p
thanks dear :*
*digma:
u give me happy thoughts :*
*zooz:
radaaaaina 3l daisies!!!
yooooz yabi al secret hidden doors o beds :p 5alni sakta 3anik bs
Girl, dont worry, im getting u the hair straightner :p
Loved the poem, as always :)
Once more i'm touched by your writings...keep it up!
9oooo 9weeee6 :)
creative and unique :)
keep writing more, I wanna know if she called the police or not :-|
(suspense...film masri)
Nice,
I loved the hair part. she6anaa u love it haa ;)
*ypuoi:
7beeebty shlonich :**
and the pic im still waiting for :p
thanks babes ;)
*hitman:
thank u very much ;)
i love the pics i use with my wiritngs they complete the message.
*bella:
b3d 3mreeeeeeeeeeeeee :***
ma7ad 7as feeni `3erich ;)
hehehe mashkora and i love u :*
*maze:
thanks man ;)
*zizo:
9weeee6 wayhik! a5af bs u even read it! :p
*ghasheeema:
lol film masri 3ad :p that wasnt my intention at all ... sometimes there are other parts, sometimes there isnt .. its up to her.
*common:
LOL why would i love it! hehehe shchayifni ?? gilel al 7aya
your blog may7ibni =( i checked ams ma 6ila3li update =P tawa yi6la3 2 days l8 !! :r
laish il 3unf;p ?
i hope you're alright sweety
everything is going to be ok
i'm really worried about you
do you want to talk about it?!
looooooooool
i think i over did it :P
well written but i believe it could've been longer
yeah don't mess the hair do!
*dooda:
a7san lay7ibik :p 7eta ana ma7ibik xp
im always the last to know when ever i have an update!! and i update for twodays and u dont know! what kind of assistant are u ??? ! @@
*um mit3ib:
lol sometimes ,, yabela :p
*bassem:
hehehehe ok yes i think u over did it :p
but thanks anyways ...
it couldve been longer, i like mine short.. kind of my special writing style ;)
kilshay wala the hair do :p anyways nice having u here again.
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