Tuesday, November 21, 2006

rooted


you have left
but i have stayed,
and so did the sun.
it is never dark.
never again will i drink,
whats not mine.
wine, of light and power-
i am with my own.
as difficult or hopeless,
dont come around.
leave! "i may bite"...
and so u left,
and i have stayed.

it is my ground.

*ps: happy birthday tinka :*** love u girl ;)
*pps: i watched "
Kate and Leopold" with my sis :`( i want all of that! a beautiful movie!
MEN: plz plz plz! watch it and learn!!!

19 comments:

do0da said...

is it a shotgun or is it not ? :P

do0da said...

i liked the, "i am with my own, as difficult or hopeless"

gr8 piece kal3ada =)

Anonymous said...

lovely post dear!

AmoOora said...

"It is my ground"
It sure is sweetie..

and i havent seen Kate and Leopold bSs just for the record :
Men never learn ;p

Anonymous said...

Good attempt ZiZi ;)

Dakhtour said...

kalam kebeeer :)

Happy birthday tinkaaaaa

and Kate % Leo was really a nice movie o athker shefta men zeman eb cinema el 7amra :P!! Shal eghbar ely 6ala3teh!! bs 9ej 7ada romantic movie ya romanceya ;)

No3iK said...

*doda:
mabrok 3laik :p
mashkooor man ..

*maze:
oooh thanks dear :)

*amoora:
yeeeh each girl should keep her ground.
and bout men!! i know, but i think theres hope .. i wanted to cry today watching the movie ,, but i still have faith :(

*supernitfah:
thanks 7bebty :***

*zizo:
eeeeeeeeeeeeee
e5ty yabat al dvd and shes like zanob u have to see this movie ,,
ehya maskeeena mn zuman t7in 3lay tbeni ashofa bs may9er! fa finally today i watched itttt
and OUCH!!! OUCH!!! i melteeeed ya ziiiiiiz shino hatha!!

No3iK said...

*lialy:
yeeeeeh i like this part to ;)
nice of u to notice it! :***

Anonymous said...

:) cute

Yazeed said...

well thanks for the mini-explanation/class
i think i get it than everyone else here:)
elly ba3arfa, after i understanded this, is whats the inspiration, what happened that made u write this?


...the movie?

No3iK said...

*anonymous:
whats cute exactly??? be more specific :p

*zooz:
heheeheh gilel al 7aya
yizay 9arli sa3a agrig 3la rasik !!
hehehe anyways ... two things did:
- the movie + our men.
- the pic.

Anonymous said...

lovely :)

I love that movie.. was watching it last week.. I want all that too.. all of it.. ya 7athy ;P

phoenix said...

No3ik, I'm glad you stayed.
A very touching peice by a brilliant women such as yourself..I appluad you many times over and over and over sweety, and you deserve it!!

No3iK said...

*digma:
hehehehe b3d 3mre exactly how i felt
i dont want some parts! i want ALLLL OF IT!

*marzouq:
lol badda3t!! i love that to each poem u read it and see it a very different way ! :p but it always works ,, coz u know poetry reflects on its reader never does it have on interpritation :p
sooooooooooo now the big question is why divorce :p hehehehehe kidding.
bs when i mentioned ground, its metaphorical means all she has ,, her own her self her life dreams and ideas she doesnt want to change them.

*phoooooooph:
7beeeebty
-hugs-
i swear sometimes i write, and write just so that u read :* love u

Common_Sense said...

Don't worry honey, I'll stay with you, let hem leave. I'll bite with you if you want ;p~

bs 7asafa I liked the hair pulling part from last post, I hoped for more ;p

b3eed 3an el3aba6 its nice bs "never again will i drink whats not mine" shakooooo

Spontaneousnessity said...

oh wow, touchy poem, your work!?

No3iK said...

*marzouq:
uve been watching lots of TV :p
hehehehehe but nice
u could write a story actually

*common:
yl maynon ya 7ibik 7g al 3onf :p
heheheh
im glad y likey ;)

*spontan:
forgive ur nick name is just to long and im a bad spelller my self
anyways im soo glad and flattered u like my work, and yes its all my work.

No3iK said...

loooooooooooooooool

eee the biting :p

i have many hottis around

add leopold and superman to a list of

scofield
sawyer
jack
dr.md.dreamy
dr.mc.steamy

hehehehehe the list keeps growing :p

so ,, the biting goes on i think.

Reem said...

hiii :D
"never again will i drink" wayed 7elo hal line mashallah :)

"it is my ground" so, plz all of u idiots: PISS OFF!! ;p

i watched d movie.. i absolutely melt away when Leopold in a charming accent says: "Kate, may i have a word with you".. loool!! nicey nicey :D