your smile,
- fresh sprinkled water on my face -
your look,
- wanting to be your princess forever -
your touch,
- every edge I've got, is softer -
your words,
- my heart blushes -
your scent,
- I'm finally home -
your warmth,
- why hugs ever existed -
you,
- crushes my heart to miss -
*ps: salaaaamtich 7bebty "uknow who u are" i love u so much.
23 comments:
SHOTGUN !!!
wow sweety definitly one of ur better pieces! me likey alot!
yala mo bagi shay o u get ur hug =_
ohhhh!! i just love love!! i love it!! it's amazing...
hmmm inshallah u get ur hug soon my dear... "my heart blushes" i really really know the feeling!!
:** loved ur piece!! love ya more!!
Beautiful yet it hurts :)
Allah esalmech 7abeebty o el shar mayech.. No need to say 7abebty o hal sowalef 3alashan e'6ay3en el 9agla.. el bloggers kelhom e3arfon el kalam 7gy o khala9 u can't hide it anymore :P
Beautiful but excruciating!
*dodA:
hehehehe very appreciated.
inshalah soon :(
*reem:
b3d 3mre thanks babes ...
inshallah sooner than i expect :)
i bet u do ;p love ya :*
*carls:
then u get it ;)
*ziz:
ro7 nam :p
*nora:
thanks and sowi :**
i hate u .. u're never gonna learn are you?! drop the gay poems.. they dont impress me.. get a life you loser ! lol
that was the last comment u'll ever get from me and you know why.. :(
A M A Z I N G!
This poem is 3ajeeeeeeeeba babes.. :*
u should publish ur poems in a book, and this should b the first one! ;)
o i would like to say "salamat" the same friend and its not u zizoo ;p
lovely poem.. i LOVED it! khaletene i miss... ba3ad!
LOVED IT!!!
heheheheh ;)
LOVE IT !!
mashalah 3alich, you've got a way with words :)
see im not the only one who sugested you publish a book.. bella also said it..
you should walla, id be the first to buy it too ;p
i loved this peice, definitly one of the best, i just loved it..
i want a hug now too ;p
inshalla ull get your hug soooooooon, very soooooon ;*
v. nice :D
i miss when you used to have interesting posts.. wait a sec.. that never happned.. ;p lol
*dr.lost:
last comment u say!!!
-dance of victory- wooohoooo ;D
*bella:
- huuuuuggggggssssssss -
7beeeeeeeeeeeeebty
thanks :******
means alot to me wallah
ur comment made my day ;*
*ni3na3ah:
;) yh yh yh 7araakaaat!
miss ya glbi miss ,, shwarana ;p
*nunu:
merci ma darling :*
*reem:
3asa doom ;)
*glamorous:
thanks sweety :*
*amoooooora:
u always write the sweetest comment!
ur just sooo sweet :*
thanks babes. inshallah one day i will :* wala ehimich bs ;)
-HUGS-
*cixous:
thank u :)
*dr.lost:
??!!
why are u here again? :p
i'm flattered 9ara7a
madarait inny chithee ghalee :P
That's so sweet :)
*zooz:
yeah eeee u should be :p
*shooush:
thanks sweeety :*
At last a happy one! 7amdilla! I hope things are going well for you these days! Keep em coming!
*eshd3wa:
thanks babes :*
*maaz:
inshallah they will ;) thanks.
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