you have left
but i have stayed,
and so did the sun.
it is never dark.
never again will i drink,
whats not mine.
wine, of light and power-
i am with my own.
as difficult or hopeless,
dont come around.
leave! "i may bite"...
and so u left,
and i have stayed.
it is my ground.
*ps: happy birthday tinka :*** love u girl ;)
*pps: i watched "Kate and Leopold" with my sis :`( i want all of that! a beautiful movie!
MEN: plz plz plz! watch it and learn!!!
19 comments:
is it a shotgun or is it not ? :P
i liked the, "i am with my own, as difficult or hopeless"
gr8 piece kal3ada =)
lovely post dear!
"It is my ground"
It sure is sweetie..
and i havent seen Kate and Leopold bSs just for the record :
Men never learn ;p
Good attempt ZiZi ;)
kalam kebeeer :)
Happy birthday tinkaaaaa
and Kate % Leo was really a nice movie o athker shefta men zeman eb cinema el 7amra :P!! Shal eghbar ely 6ala3teh!! bs 9ej 7ada romantic movie ya romanceya ;)
*doda:
mabrok 3laik :p
mashkooor man ..
*maze:
oooh thanks dear :)
*amoora:
yeeeh each girl should keep her ground.
and bout men!! i know, but i think theres hope .. i wanted to cry today watching the movie ,, but i still have faith :(
*supernitfah:
thanks 7bebty :***
*zizo:
eeeeeeeeeeeeee
e5ty yabat al dvd and shes like zanob u have to see this movie ,,
ehya maskeeena mn zuman t7in 3lay tbeni ashofa bs may9er! fa finally today i watched itttt
and OUCH!!! OUCH!!! i melteeeed ya ziiiiiiz shino hatha!!
*lialy:
yeeeeeh i like this part to ;)
nice of u to notice it! :***
:) cute
well thanks for the mini-explanation/class
i think i get it than everyone else here:)
elly ba3arfa, after i understanded this, is whats the inspiration, what happened that made u write this?
...the movie?
*anonymous:
whats cute exactly??? be more specific :p
*zooz:
heheeheh gilel al 7aya
yizay 9arli sa3a agrig 3la rasik !!
hehehe anyways ... two things did:
- the movie + our men.
- the pic.
lovely :)
I love that movie.. was watching it last week.. I want all that too.. all of it.. ya 7athy ;P
No3ik, I'm glad you stayed.
A very touching peice by a brilliant women such as yourself..I appluad you many times over and over and over sweety, and you deserve it!!
*digma:
hehehehe b3d 3mre exactly how i felt
i dont want some parts! i want ALLLL OF IT!
*marzouq:
lol badda3t!! i love that to each poem u read it and see it a very different way ! :p but it always works ,, coz u know poetry reflects on its reader never does it have on interpritation :p
sooooooooooo now the big question is why divorce :p hehehehehe kidding.
bs when i mentioned ground, its metaphorical means all she has ,, her own her self her life dreams and ideas she doesnt want to change them.
*phoooooooph:
7beeeebty
-hugs-
i swear sometimes i write, and write just so that u read :* love u
Don't worry honey, I'll stay with you, let hem leave. I'll bite with you if you want ;p~
bs 7asafa I liked the hair pulling part from last post, I hoped for more ;p
b3eed 3an el3aba6 its nice bs "never again will i drink whats not mine" shakooooo
oh wow, touchy poem, your work!?
*marzouq:
uve been watching lots of TV :p
hehehehehe but nice
u could write a story actually
*common:
yl maynon ya 7ibik 7g al 3onf :p
heheheh
im glad y likey ;)
*spontan:
forgive ur nick name is just to long and im a bad spelller my self
anyways im soo glad and flattered u like my work, and yes its all my work.
loooooooooooooooool
eee the biting :p
i have many hottis around
add leopold and superman to a list of
scofield
sawyer
jack
dr.md.dreamy
dr.mc.steamy
hehehehehe the list keeps growing :p
so ,, the biting goes on i think.
hiii :D
"never again will i drink" wayed 7elo hal line mashallah :)
"it is my ground" so, plz all of u idiots: PISS OFF!! ;p
i watched d movie.. i absolutely melt away when Leopold in a charming accent says: "Kate, may i have a word with you".. loool!! nicey nicey :D
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